
मेरी हंसी देख सकते हो तुम।
मेरी गुलाबी आंखों की छवि देख सकते हो तुम।
मेरे गालों पर पड़ते गड्ढे देख सकते हो तुम।
मेरे लंबे बालों की लट्टें देख सकते हो तुम।
मेरे तन का रंग देख सकते हो तुम।
मेरे शरीर की बनावट-ढंग देख सकते हो तुम।
सब देख सकते हो तुम,
फिर भी क्या मुझे देख सकते हो तुम?
रूह की चुभन, व्याकुल मन देख सकते हो तुम?
जो अथाह बेचैनी में गुजार दिए,
वो क्षण देख सकते हो तुम?
जिन्होंने उठा दिया निश्छलता से विश्वास
मेरे अंदर बसा उनका
जहरीला स्मरण देख सकते हो तुम?
अगर नहीं..
तो बस भ्रम देख सकते हो तुम।
झुठी हंसी, झुठा चलन देख सकते हो तुम।
देखकर भी मुझे नहीं देख सकते हो तुम।
©Dr.Kavita
बहुत बढ़िया लिखा है आप ने| अति सुंदर रचना है| Keep writing.
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आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद 🙏🙏😊😊
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एक ख़ूबसूरत काव्य 🌷♥️👍🏻🙏 प्यार एक ऐसा शब्द है जो कई वादे करता है , वो बेवफ़ा निकलते वक्त क्या करूँ,
एक पत्नि के अंदर मन की उम्मीदें टूटते हो और व्याकुलता की सच्चाई देख सकते हो इस कविता में 🌷🙏♥️🌷बधाइयाँ 👏
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आपका तहे दिल से आभार 🙏😊
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शुक्रिया 🌷🙏❤️🌷
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बेहद उम्दा लिखा है बेटा 👌❤😊
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Thank you so much 🙏🙏❣❣
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Myyyyyyyy soulmate is backkk!!!!!!
OfCoUrSe, I can see everything ( cuz I’ve eyes) so Lol!… Great post as always!🤗
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Yes cutie pie you can see and understand everything because you are a smart kid.😎
And thank you so much you for liking my post.❣❣
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YEPP!! Yw!! XD… play this quiz anyway, today is the last day! I had given a task to a dummy toask you to play this quiz but i know for sure, it is not completed yet! righto?
https://truthquestions.net/quiz/70d103
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Sorry cutie i didn’t get time to participate in this quiz..i hope i don’t get upset🙏😘💝
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Np 😉 you may play it next time XD Xoxo!
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Offcourse dear😊😊
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Nice blog!!;)
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Thank you so much for your appreciation and kind words🙏🙏😊❣
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ह्रदयस्पर्शी भावाभिव्यक्ति 👌🏼👌🏼
👏👏👏👏🤗
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दिल से शुक्रिया अनिता जी🙏🙏😊😊❣❣
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😊
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ह्रदयस्पर्शी भावाभिव्यक्ति 👏👏😊
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दिल से शुक्रिया😊😊💝💝🙏🙏
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🤗
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बहुत ही सुंदर लिखा है ✨
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Thank you so much 😊😊
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हम दिखावे से परे देख सकते हैं कविता में व्यक्त विचार में पढ़ सकते हैं क्योंकि शब्दों में लिखे गए प्रतीक ऐसे पात्र हैं जो दिलों से बाहर आते हैं …
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बेटी, तेरे बताये बिना, कोई भी, कोई भी तेरा मन जान नहीं पायेगा।
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मैं मानती हूँ । पर मेरी दुविधा है कि फिर औरतों में ये गुण क्यों दिया है ईश्वर ने कि वो खुद से जुड़े आदमी का बस चेहरा मात्र देखकर उसके मन की बात पढ़ लेती हैं? मैं भावनात्मक बातों की बात कर रहीं हूँ। और औरतों से मेरा संदर्भ अधिकांश औरतों से है, दुनिया की सारी औरतों से नहीं।
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Allow me to reply in Eng. Faster for me. …The women of your acquaintance, majority or all the women. your First mistake is that you think that ‘just by looking at the face’ you read the thoughts of men. Learn more and talk (write) less. Then at least you will be able to come out of your gloom. …you see, unlike others, I do not write comments to gain followers.
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Okay.
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Blessings, my Dear.
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मेरा comment show नहीं हो रहा ?😔
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Sorry for inconvenience..अब show ho rha hai apka comments.
और आपका तहे दिल से आभार मेरी कविता की सराहना करने के लिए और अपनी सकारात्मकता से मेरा प्रोत्साहन बढ़ाने के लिए 🙏🙏😊😊❣❣
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कविता आप बहुत अच्छा लिखती
हो । मेरी ओर से आपको बहुत-बहुत शुभकामनाएँ ⚘😊
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Lovely work!!
Loved it absolutely 👏🏻👏🏻
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😊😊😄😄Thank you so much 🙏🙏❣❣
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And sorry for all the unwanted notifications
My intentions was not to bomb your notifications 😅
I got highly interested in reading whatever I can. 🙂
There’s so much more from you that I want to read.
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Your notifications made me happy only. So thank you for your efforts and time and please dont explain your intentions. I got that you are a positive person who know how to appreciate and support others.
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Hi… miss!!!
I wanna say sumpthing bout this Snake (Shanky)
he is the annoyest one, talkin about silly stuffs!!! YOU MUST scold him! AND YEAH! SEND him to a boarding school I know for suree, he’d get better!
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😂😂..
But i don’t think any school will help him now. Only he can help himself to get better that also only when he’ll think he needs to change. And i cannot scold him because he’d scold me back
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JUST SLAP HIM if he scolds you back!!! you must be a strict mom! and slap him extra times from my SIDE as well 😂 BUT FIRSTLY, i wanna deliver a good speech bout this kid, THAT HE’S THE SMARTEST ONE IN THE WHOLE WORLD, please don’t send him anywhere… He’s so good but a bit annoying too (I CAN’T LIE, JUST TELLIN the truth lamaoo) you’re lucky to have an amzing son! LOVES.LOVES! XD XD
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I know he is a good kid but not soo good, so i would definitely like to slap him if i will get a chance because this is your order too. And btw he is not my son.
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अत्यंत सुंदर भाव 👌👌
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आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद 🙏🙏🤗🤗
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दिल को छूने वाली बेहतरीन रचना।👌👌
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पसंद करने के लिए ह्रदय से धन्यवाद आपका✨❤😊😇
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